All Comments on 'One Dark and Stormy Night Ch. 01'

so far so good. i think you could make it even better by slowing it down, making it a little bit longer.

I try this misterios talk,you call this rain catties and dog some I undrstand and will be better for me in the nexty one many salutations I am enjoying myself.LUIGI

Once again you have wrote a hot, exciting story. Your story are only getting better.......keep up the good work. "You know who!"