All Comments on 'One Day Layover'

Sure, it's more cuck shit, nothing wrong with that kind of story.

this doesn't reach the point of being a story. Two minutes with a dildoe, and whoop-the-fuck-doo.

He gave you 1*?

Overly generous.

Wish I could give you a -2, but I'm loath to insult preschoolers.

Finish the damn story before you publish it. I hate half finished stories!

Not one of your stories is completed. You seem to have the start of some be y good stories, but simply let them die off. Finish the stories before you start another one.