All Comments on 'One Fateful Evening Ch. 01-10'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
This is one of the most...

...god aweful gross stories I have ever read. I gadge that by the number of times the instigator claims to love someone stacked up against the number of times they prove that they don't. Note to the author... It is your story but you would do better to just let the guy have his distain for what is taking place. Your story suffers a lack of credulity otherwise.

LovecutefeetLovecutefeetabout 10 years ago
Great story of personal growth

For both--hubby realizes that his place is to serve, and the ladies allow themselves finally to be served! Perfect!

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