All Comments on 'One Fine Sunday'

Continue, please! That was so hot.

Continue please!

That was hot

keep going please. I love the idea of someone seeing what they want and just going for it. There is a lot of pussy-footing around in these stories usually and it is very frustrating but you skipped all that and good on you I say.

Loved it, keep writing coz I'll definitely be reading lol

Wow is the simplest word but geez there has to be more lol

Thank you everyone for the nice comments. I.. Ummm, this is the first attempt of mine tryna write somehing like this. and I am really glad that people like it! i will definitely try to continue it. ^_^

thanks to Maria for poking my enough to do this! :D

Frosty's showing her variety here with this delicious piece of erotica! You guys have NO idea what she can do with her words. I think this story is hot and made me happy the first, the second and now this thrid time I read it.

We demand more. :)

Nice story, very hot.