All Comments on 'One House, Two Families Ch. 03'
by SirSinn
- 42 Comments
Sex4lf57about 9 years agoGood story. Not as much sex as I had hoped for after waiting so long. Looking forward to the next chapter which sounds hopeful.
Raziel83about 9 years agoVery good.
Sometimes incest stories have the characters immediately get over all their taboos immediately, but I like that you occasionally put some extra effort and allow time for the sexual tension rather than immediately turn the family into an orgy... The mothers having had an incest affair previously? Ok, that explains why they got over it so soon, and now that I think about it, they were the catalyst for most of the incest in this story.
MJOabout 9 years agoI have to tell you, it has almost gotten to the point that if a new SirSinn story is not available I just skip trying to find something else to read and just navigate to another site. What I am trying to say is you are one of the best on (in) Literotica. Thank you.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoSuch a tease, but I love it! After Trophy Wives Club ended, I have been craving more similar stories from you. Now that this series is up and going, I'm definitely excited. Keep it coming!
Anonymousabout 9 years agoWell, Janine's worries seem inconsistent with the end of the first chapter. You ended that with “Now she'd discovered her son's huge prick, there was no way she would be able to resist it again. Maybe not tonight, maybe not tomorrow, but she knew she'd be fucking him soon.” In addition you had her telling Pete, “Oh, there's definitely going to be a next time.”
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Her indecision about it, her plans to make sure it doesn’t happen again seem out of left field and contrary to the end of the first chapter. This is especially true after she reverses this stance several times over the course of the conversation/session with Tricia – and even more so after it turns out the cousins are all half sibling. It’s as if you wanted to introduce some conflict. It wasn’t really needed.
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Okay, Tricia and Janine fucked their brother and both had a set of fraternal twins by him. Four kids, two mothers, one daddy. Ya pretty much had enough conflict right there.
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As I said, this is very good. Her “Oh, I shouldn’t have” doesn’t hurt it, but it doesn’t help it, either.
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What I really hope is that it won't be another monthe before the next chapter. I can imagine what the "party" will be like. Or would orgy be a better term?
sethteraniosabout 9 years agoHi there,
I love this series and hope there is more, very soon. Please keep up the great work!
SirSinnabout 9 years agoAuthorGlad most of you seem to be enjoying this - - life has gotten in the way lately but there will be more soon!
tankrabbitabout 9 years agoI saw your comment earlier about life getting in the way, I certainly can relate. At the beginning of chapter one you commented on not taking the story seriously. It's fantasy, and one that seems to be very popular. Please keep this particular fantasy alive, at least for a little while.
Thanks for efforts
lustyreaderabout 9 years agoLoving the myriad of possibilities! Your writing draws me in and make me feel as if I am there.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoThe daughter should ask about the BJ given to him by his mom, the brother can also blurt out that his sister had a girl girl session with her cousin after revealin the BJ, or maybe you can just include strip poker.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoIn his blog (the URL is in his bio) he wrote in May, "Trying to get back to writing now -- sad news is, I think "One House, Two Families" is going to go on hiatus for a while. Just not feeling the vibe to continue it just yet. Thanks for all your suggestions for dares on the earlier post."
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Pity. Personally, I thought this was the best set-up of SirSinn's stories. I also, personnally, don't really think the dares are really needed. Most of the set-up for getting everyone together is there. I would think it would be a simple thing to get everyone fucking in one or two chapters, if nothing more than to finish the story.
SirSinnover 8 years agoAuthorSorry for not having finished this -- I got sidetracked on to another story and haven't yet had the urge to continue this one. I might at some point write the ending to it or I might not.
An icon to show an unfinished story isn't a bad idea -- you might also request an "ongoing" icon to show that a story with a large number of chapters is still underway even though the ending hasn't been reached yet if you see what I mean.
ansdguyalmost 8 years agoJust when this story is about to get really good, nothing more?
Sensualleeover 7 years agoPlease finish this story - every one is hung up waiting, and it ain't fair.
Sensualleeover 7 years agoI'm in 450% agreement with those who keep calling for more, more, more; I'm in line with my hands at my crotch. Please don't wait too long.
masaguaporfavorover 6 years agoLove this story series so much, just reread it in its entirety.
Would LOVE for you to jump back in and give these families the kinky fuckfest and casual harem that it seems like they'd all just be itching to fall into.
Hope you come back to them once you're done fleshing out FAMILY BUSINESS!
XX - Masa
Anonymousover 6 years agolol, just as I was really getting into the story it ended, wtf. you need about 10 more chapters. loved it l
Anonymousabout 6 years agoThere must be more to the story. You set up a nice family party and then leave us hanging? C'mon man at least one more chapter.
SirSinnabout 5 years agoAuthorHi all
Yes it's been a long time coming but I plan on releasing the final chapter of this story soon.
Anonymousabout 5 years agoLoved it so far. This has huge potential IMO. Mind you, I can't believe you've gone three chapters without any tit-fucking. Must be a record for you!!
SirSinnabout 5 years agoAuthorSorry people -- life and work and boring stuff gets in the way and has prevented me working on this. Plan to finish it soon.
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