All Comments on 'One Last Family Holiday Pt. 01'

The quality of the relations are somewhat hard to understand.

The siblings, who are around 20 years old, seems like not having seen each other in nightgown before, still there is no hesitation to share a double bed - and in that age putting some sun lotion on your mother's back feels strange also at the outset?

Too many characters, too much of nothing

I like a slow build, can't wait to read more!

Too bad you didn't come back to finish the story