All Comments on 'One Little Bruise'

super.

I liked this one a lot... Great work, hope there's more of them... if not it was still really good...

Jumping to conclusions turned out to be a good thing! And the title is just perfect.

I can't believe this is your first story. Great job. Hopefully you'll continue this story. Nothing like gay erotica ;)

Great story! I look forwad to reading more from you.

continue with this story! This was so hot and awesome! Loved the characters and storyline. Its sooooo good that adding more to this story would make it even better (if thats possible!) Loved it!

Hope you continue with these characters. I'd be curious to know if jock Sam comes out. It'd also be nice if they made it out of the car and onto a bed. :o) I particularly like that Jamie, while submissive sexually, is willing to stand up for himself.

Funny and cute and definitely room for more story to come! I'm excited to see what you do next

Very good storyline, good dialogue between the characters. Could use a little proofreading/editing, but all in all a fantastic submission. :) Would love to see it continue.

I loved it. I hope you keep it going. I love those two together. I see a lot of potential. Please keep the story going.

Please write another!

I hope there will be a lot more!! Please keep writing!

I hope you continue with this story! I liked the other one too. I'll be keeping an eye out for further submissions from you. =-)

This is the 4th time I've read your story in as many days....so yeah, I enjoyed it. I hope you revisit these two characters in a series. Good pace - wasn't weighed down by Sam's confusion about his attraction - he just acts. Sexy - first hands-on in the car during a downpour. Someone already commented about proofing - needs a bit, but I didn't notice issues until the 4th read. Good job.

I love this story and I've read it over and over. I forgot the name of it and your name and tried to find it for a couple of weeks then I was just scrolling through and found it. I was super happy when I saw it. I can't wait to read more about Sam and Jamie they make a great couple. Thank you for a great read sometimes I get a little disappointed when I'm reading a story because it seems like the same old stuff but this one seemed like a fresh ideal and you really pulled off a wonderful story.

The second chapter has been submitted and is pending approval. :)

very good

I loved it!! I've read it so many times because it never fails to make me smile. I've got it bookmarked! LOL. It's so funny; I've never read anything quite like it.

Where is Chapter 3???

Really love this, and would love a third chapter like you promised. I keep hoping to see one, but no such luck :(

This series is one I can come back to occasionally, and it's hot every time. I would love to see the promised next chapter, but in the meantime I will re-read what's here. Because it's seriously good.

That was so hot! I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories :-)

Happy Writing

What a cute little story! I love it!

(Oh and totally hot too!)

pleaseeeeeeeeee write more, i really want to see more of these two. their so hot.

great story!!!!!!

I READ AND REREAD!!! These two are so cute. You HAVE to have a sequel to this!

Sounds like a romatic si-fi movie I want to see lol. I laughed so much. Tank cu

Sexy as fuck. Loved it.

I just loved this and I am very happy to find the next chapter is already posted. These two are just wonderful Iove them already. Thank you for your talent, Good luck and good wrighting!

-A friend

Ha! I'm the first comment on over 11 years. I hope that means others begin to find this one again. It's so good, fun and sexy!

Onto part 2.

Awesome! Very entertaining read.