All Comments on 'One Long Dream Ch. 05'

This is getting really hot now. i am glad that i continued reading this story. It is interesting that He has extended the "game" for another 72 hours, so He is definately going to have some fun ..... and so shall we with a bit of luck.

The story took a while to get going, but I realize that you were lavishing attention on setup. Now it's right up to speed. Once you accept the slightly unlikely starting premise, it's believable and follows as plausible an arc as these sorts of stories ever do. I'm glad Adam finally got around to getting his cock in her asshole and her knickers in her mouth. I'm fascinated to see where you go with this now.

One quibble: anal plugs and penises need lots of lube, and not just soap and water. She should be screaming in agony being assfucked dry. The only really implausible bit so far.