All Comments on 'One Man's Family'

Could have been in Romance category or Interracial or Loving Wives. But it is just fine where it is.

I liked it for several things. Bobby was solicitous and protective when his friend was disrespectful and abusive to his wife. Through Bobby, Marissa learns what it can be like with a man who knows and who wants it to be good for her. Then there is the kinky bit of her daughter wanting him for her first time. And Marissa wanting her daughter to be with him! Instead of an inept boy her age, Kathy gets a first time so good, she keeps going with him -- and Mama approves! Like I said, a HOT one.

It is well written with lots of well-conceived dialog. Each character stands out on his own -- for example, Kim does not immediately latch on to Uncle Bobby for her first time, just because sister Kathy did it that way.

An enjoyable, heartwarming 5 star read.

Paul in Oklahoma

It was ok but to add Kathy and have her say ahe wants only him and no one else then end with she will go and find someone else is just flip flopping bullshit. You know where you are going with the story and characters there is no need for that kinda of crap. Just have it as you made it end up being a short fling to help her learn and not start in one direction then 180° turn like you did. It added nothing to the story only took away from it and made Kathy a completely useless character that ended up in a bad light by the readers