All Comments on 'One Man's Search Ch. 09'

Good to see an update. I think this chapter was the best one you've done. I particularly liked how you have Reggie respecting Shinji's history and developing their relationship at a rate that is comfortable for Shinji. I like how you smoothly fit both their perspectives in.

The one thing that was missing for me is the development of the non-sexual part of their relationship. I'd have liked to see some scenes that showed how they grew into that comfortable relationship you described on the couch before his ex-sub Annie (?) showed up. I hope that Reggie will open up to Shinji more too. I think he deserved to know who she was. I think it would have helped him to know who Luke (lol im terrible with names sorry :) was to Reggie.

I look forward to the next chapter and hope you'll let us see both the sexual and non-sexual side of this relationship. I thought it was really sweet that he'd given him the necklace and too bad that Shinji was asleep when Reggie announced he loved him.

I really do love this series. Enough that I'm commenting at 1 in the morning. I apologize for the nastygram on the last chapter- you hit on one of my only pet peeves. Het sex is a complete turn-off for me, so I was more than a little irritated. I'm sorry. Thank you, though, for including notes at the beginning of this chapter.

Cannd couldn't have said it better. I love all the chapters but this one was brilliant. I agree also on the way that Reggie developed the bond between them both and the trust they created together could not be broken. I hope there is more to come as I am a sucker for a good romance, but if not it was a beautiful way to end the story, but if you do have more up your sleeve I hope you will let us know what Luke's punishment was, apart from ostracization from the club, was he arrested, charged??? Or better yet got his just desserts, but no I wouldn't wish that treatment on anyone

Keep writing you are a great writer and the detail and depth you put in is to be admired

it was a brilliant i really love it and hope there wil be more