All Comments on 'One More Time Ch. 02'

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LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 10 years ago
A Five!

But you could us an editor. I can help.

chesthairslavechesthairslaveover 10 years ago
Holiday Sleepovers & A Bonus Beginning

10 stars for the opening story within the chapter; the perfect penis prelude! The rest of the chapter is a blast.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Casey 1988

I like how those two are slowly getting closer and closer. I have a feeling that Derek will deny the relationship when they are asked.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
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Not as good as "Destiny in Daytona," but it's getting there!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

LESS SEX MORE LOVE SUCKING FUCKING BORING . IN LOVE BETTER

CuriousPeteCuriousPeteover 8 years ago
Lovin it

This is really heating up and I love it. Haven't orgasm'd yet because I keep getting interrupted. On to ch 3.

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Just a regular guy that's gay and enjoys writing as a serious hobby. My stories will almost always be same-sex-oriented and tend to run more towards the romance and/or the first-time genres with the occasional foray into the drama or mystery areas. I do occasionally pop off a ...

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