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All Comments on 'One Night'

by APGilmore

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Needs some work, but good

Not a bad story. Overall it was decent, just the dialog lacked believability. The confession and everything following felt too contrived. Other then that I liked it

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