All Comments on 'One Night'

Very good story, did it really happen.

I came reading it.

Steve

Great story that is very well written. I hope we see more postings soon. Thanks!!!

You can write, woman. You should make it a habit.

Been waiting for this!! :D Very very good!

Hot, hotter, hottest! Loved it immensely.

Great story I shot my load with you when you were both cumming for the second time. More like this.

John

That was total flames of desire with all the emotions of two lovers starting a long relationship. Lead on and don't let the flames die to embers in our memories. Burn baby burn your way deeper in our hearts

You have captured the essence of an encounter above and beyond the norm. To believe that this is fiction is pushing the realm of reality. Your emotions and description are breathtaking. Just enough set up to lead to the culmination of the sexual side. Almost too good not to have been real. You captured every man's fantasy. Well done. Would have given you a 10!

VERY good writing my dear! ;o) Loved it!

and a good story to boot. Thanks

Fantastic, the best I have read in weeks. I am looking forward to more.