by Colleen Thomas
*sigh*
When Lauren slides her oil-soaked fingers into Roxanne's tight squirming ass - oh my!
Lovely and luscious. Delightfully told. Erotically literate.
Thank you for this thoroughly naughty read (and for giving me some nasty thoughts to share with my husband).
Well done!
sarahh
This is a wonderful story. It has a plot and sex. Usually we get one or the other not both. It took me awhile to get through. But I could read it again and again. You are the best!!
Nanayo
"We cried! You made us cry at the end. Plus my girlfriend fucked me up the ass, which made me cry just as hard. We loved 'One Night at the Jefferson'. Keep up the good work. We want more." Love Kim & Maggie.
Wow i Love this story it is beautiful,romantic,exotic and the sex hottttttttttttt...it made me orgasm just reading this. I love it keep up the good work...can't wait to read more of your stories
It was a struggle for me sometimes to keep an open mind through the sadism/torture part of Lauren's approach, but I finally made it. Two people in a caring relationship who know what each other wants. I know this is only a work of fiction, but just fantasizing somewhat, I would still hope that Lauren would learn to tone down the torture just a notch. Maybe it still has to do with my education on these types of relationships, but to me Lauren seemed to revel a bit much in out-and-out teasing Roxanne, taking advantage of her sweet nature. (Yes, this reader identifies with Roxanne a lot more than with Lauren.) It is unfortunate that Colleen is no longer here to write a sequel or update about this unusual, though mutually satisfying, relationship. Heavens, could Colleen weave a realistic story. I could imagine sitting across from either Roxanne or Lauren and having a meaningful conversation.
i read the whole story and i love it! i had to stop between part 2 and part 3 to play with myself. i am a roxanne waiting for my lauren!
You have captured the essence of the struggles we all deal with at the beginning of every relationship. Your descriptions are filled with believable eroticism and the events move at a realistic pace. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Keep them coming.
In 2016, I hope literotica.com commemorates Colleen Thomas with a month long feature of nothing but her work in the top 10 slots on Literotica's Lesbian Hall of Fame. It is my understanding it will have been 10 years since she passed. I believe millions of readers from across the world have read her stories, enjoyed them and learned something new or something about themselves. She was truly, one of a kind, as evidence by her timeless work. Honor her (please when the time comes - Thank you)
Forever ever -This will be a Top 10 fave. EVERYTHING Colleen Thomas has ever written are masterpieces. R.I.P. Colleen. She will always be the Queen of Literotica's lesbian literature, with Carey Thomas being heir to the throne, in my opinion. (Per Carey, they're not related). I am sorry I never got a chance to write Colleen and thank her, for allowing me to live in her words. She was so gifted. Thankfully we have a treasure chest of her work on the website to continue to quench our thirst for love, romance and adventure.
I know Colleen is gone, i hope it gives her family a small measure of joy that her stories continue to give us. RIP