All Comments on 'One Night at The Phoenix'

Now that's a bar I'd love to visit.

again, there's something about your writing that really feels like a memory more than a story. i dont know if youre mixing fantasy and reality just right or what but keep it up

WOW you are one hot Writer. I certainly hope you continue on this and more stories.

I have been to a bull-riding event like this before. The girls did do slow sexy things so maybe I have been to the Phoenix. I think you should have had voting allowed on this one because I would give it a ten. I was hoping you were going to add the fun between the three at the bar. If you pick this one back up, I would enjoy it, I'm sure. I'm really liking Fran stories, she sounds like what i imagine ids you. How close is she? Another fun story that I really enjoyed

Great story Tiki, I do enjoy the close family scene and almost a good ass fucking for you in this one. Maybe next time? :-D

I get OFF every time I read this author and think of her HOT picture! Thanks!

99.9% of those who claim to be cowboys aren't. I'm not one, but am 99.9% more a cowboy that those that claim to be. I am a farmer and have handled cattle of all types for years. Many of my best friends are true Texas cowboys, a rare breed. We have a respect for each other. They know I can do almost all they can do and they can do almost all I do. They like me and call me their smarter brother...because I help them...

A great mix of good descriptive story and a good balance of dialogue, makes for very realistic story. The descriptions of the bars and all the characters allows you to visualise them all an their awesome attributes. Thoroughly enjoyed the story