All Comments on 'One Night at Xavier's Ch. 01'

Be careful about characters' height and weight. A woman who is 5'4" and weighs 120 lbs. is slim; a woman of the same weight who is almost eight inches taller is quite skinny and would be lucky to have A-cup breasts, let alone D-cup. And you describe Jubilee's breasts both as "small" and as "C-cup"; C-cup breasts are LARGE! A woman with a 36-band-size has a big rib cage and would not be described as "small".