All Comments on 'One Night Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Its a start...

Its a great start, but now let it flow with the romance and let the two roomates discover what they have always wanted.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

It's a good start. Let your muse free. If he wants a quick fuck then let him have it. Sex isn't always romantic and it doesn't have to be.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Not romance, too short, rushed.

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