All Comments on 'One Night for Peace'

Not very believable that she was a goddess. It would have been more believable if she had been a powerful cleric. Otherwise, she's just a severely limited goddess that you have a hard time connecting with. If you had had them have some titanic struggle, it might have helped. Also, he was a timid lust demon. On the plus side, at least your spelling & grammer weren't bad.

Loove the powerful lady brought down. Would've liked the gremlins having a piece too, but later, maybe?

My three fav genre's in one story, OMG i loved this. please continue with these stories they are so good

JC

I hope this morphs into a corruption piece

Very good story, and I do so very much love the ending. I'm doubting that her bargaining skills will improve all that much. Though time flows differently for immortals, I have a feeling that she will miss having banished a lust demon when the demons of pain, fear, hate or what have you show up.

...I really enjoyed it. The sub in me love her giving in and the writer in me enjoyed your writing style. Thank you for sharing.

i really hope you continue this as this story had me carefully reading every word for what might happen next, I love where you ended it And I hope it continued!