All Comments on 'One Night Stand'

by hedgehogmountain

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Good First Effort

Needs to have more detail and "body", but a good first effort! Keep writing!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Wow all 21 ywears of saving yourself to be fucked

by a stranger in a club. It is almost fitting that your first fuck both impregnate you and give you HIV. It shows the amount of maturity and intelligence you lack.

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