All Comments on 'One Night with Mom Ch. 02'

I know there are readers that like stories that don't distinguish between sex and discomfort, but this story started out with a consensual "forbidden fun" theme, then chapter two switched into the "hero" dishing out mild abuse.

This is not pleasant reading for people who *can* distinguish between sex and violence.

Agree with the previous statement. Moved beyond a little kinky to what the fuck. A good start that suspended disbelief with part one. Part 2 is a crash into that disbelief.

Love how both are so uninhibited.

You either need to stick with first person (I, me, mine), or third person (you, you're, your). You jump around like no other writer I've ever seen!!! :-p

Very bad grammar but what a fuck story for a horny old bastard like me. Lunch time in this Independent Living place and now I will get hard even looking at some of these old broad

what a middle-school fantasy! Go somewhere else and grow up.

The first chapter started out fine, progressed into sadism and then into bull crap! The second was all bull crap; mom should kick him in the balls at the end of her stupid deal as payback. This series is a waste of time! 1* and that's being generous!

Should defianly go into more respect for his mom so a deep romance can come from this.

that these idiots who bitch about what you have written are all listed ( with one exception) are listed as "Anonymous"! Not only do they not have the balls to say who they are but they HAVE NOT written even one story! These assholes don't even have a clue about what it takes to write a story! The one exception is one, xsiveone person. Even xsiveone did not have the balls to write his / her own story / stories. The simple fact is that if these assholes do not like what you write then they should not read it! Speaking as one who has been paid for his stories, all I can say is #1; keep writing, I have confidence that you will get better as you write more stories and #2; Please continue this story. I want to see how it comes out. I will put my opinion / review of this story in a separate comment.

A gentleman would have pulled out at the first sign of tears, hence the 3 stars only. Good start tho, keep up the good work.

Sorry!!!!

What is it worth to Post a comment with a name instead of anonymous? Hey, I'm Steven Smith: now you Know Me?

Does it neeed to be a cook to be able to judge a meal if it tastes? I think Not. If its too salty its too salty weather you think cooking Is a hard Job to Do or Not.

I missed The other things despite of Sex in this part. They didnt talked very much, there was no tease, just The technical description on how to fist or make anal sex.

Anonymous, the tears don't always mean no. Although I did do as you suggest once. I had woman doing all she could to get me inside her anus. She was forcing herself to do it hoping I'd commit to her. As the tears for heavier I stopped her. Never saw her again. Another woman didn't cry as much but as his mom will come to be, she became an anal freak. Demanded an anal more often than vaginal

It's very rare to read an incest story where the mother get fisted and cried during anal penetration. That's changed and seems more real....