All Comments on 'One Night with the Magician'

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jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenabout 7 years ago
Very Nice

The ending was beautiful enough to almost forget how it started and all that was revealed. Very interested in where you could (and will?) take this story in the future.

BrokenUnicornBrokenUnicornabout 7 years ago

The sex was deeply erotic. The setting feels fully realized. And Rosette is an interesting protagonist, while Sahir is a great mystery. I hope to see much more in this world.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
An amazing story!

The brilliance of this seamless story flows easily. It felt like the words were instantly painting every scene in my mind as I was reading. I hope this story leads to a greater world involving Rosette.

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