All Comments on 'One Rainy Afternoon'

Oh please do not stop here. I know in my heart of hearts there is more story here. Please continue. Patiently waiting, your avid reader, Ed.

Your wish is granted! haha, always wanted to say that.

Anyway, this appears to be a rewrite of a previous story. The sequel has already been posted, it's called "an unexpected entry"

Wish I could score this a 10.

I quit this story @ page 3- I'll tell you later why!

Having your hero so conflicted and understandably disbelieving of his circumstances restores my faith in the belief that good things come to good people, or in his case a bad girl comes on a good man. An adult romance with just enough spice to it to brighten even the rainiest day.

IF 10 chapters and are looking for a phrase in the story - can find by chapter. IF 10 Pages, the results still say the phrase is in the story, but up to you to find it. After the 3rd page so gosh darn wordy just gave up.

Fantastic

Way Too much detail in parts but that detail was great in the parts that counted. Needs a follow up for sure.. :)

Fucking. . . Exquisite.