All Comments on 'One Summer Day Ch. 02'

I LOVED IT!!! Keep going! Make a chapter 3.

A creatively risque tale that flowed rather well. The erotic story line has the reader enticed and craving more! It had part of this reader giving a standing ovation. May I suggest the continuing of the character descriptions throughout to keep the characters fresh in the readers mind.

Perhaps other words of description so the rerun factor is not an issue. This is me lobbying for a sequel or 2!

you need to write more this is an awesome story it kept me hooked right down to the very last word!

Interesting and fairly well written, great short story, great hanging climax too.