All Comments on 'One Sunny Day Ch. 01'

Mmm, Ham honey, loved this first little taster! Please Sir, can I have some more? :D I can't wait to see what happens when you have your fun!

A very sweet read - I enjoyed it. However, 2 things kept me from thoroughly enjoying the story. 1 - the constant exclamation point. Although I know that you wanted to convey the person's excitement, it got to be too much. 2 - the switching of persons (between you and she) at the beginning of the story. Otherwise, I really liked it.