All Comments on 'One Time in a Coat Closet...'

Yeah, a bit short. A fantasy's a fantasy, but I have trouble getting fully naked in a closet. Sure getting caught is have the fun, but....

Wiat, the is E&V? Who saw? In a closed closet?

But I also give it 5 stars. It's short, well-written, and sexy.

I gave it five stars. For my own taste, I would have liked a little more reluctance on Sophie's part, having her need more persuasion. This seemed remarkably easy for Eric. Sophie could have worried about her self image by letting a strange man have his way with her in what seemed like minutes.

There also could have been more of an aspect of the worry about a risk of discovery. Overheard footsteps in the hallway, for example. Maybe someone could have seen them enter the coat closet, for example, and then lingered about in order to watch a disheveled Sophie emerge later. The spy could then smile knowingly, with Sophie blushing furiously. Still, it was quite enjoyable!