All Comments on 'One Week Ch. 03'

OMG what a great way to leave one hanging your story line is excellent& the characters are well rounded..... Please another chapter soon I really enjoy your work

we want the rest of the story i want a happy ending, please!

i would love to find out what happens with all Louise.

Please please please for all us tgirls out there in the big wide world lets have a happy ending :)

Louise this is fantastic, but me & my tgirl wife want to read more.

What happens to louise??

Please let us know what happens next. Truly one of the most erotic and artfully written series I have ever read.

Please let us read more.

i hope louise gets her revenge but would hate to see her become evil please write the nxt chapter soon waiting is killing me x x x

Please finish the story it's very beautiful I would love to finish reading it

why the hell do people feel the need to destroy stories by killing the characters off at the end, whats the problem with happy ever after, you read the story, get emotionally invested in the characters then it all goes to crap at the end

I've enjoyed reading the story so far and am really looking forward to seeing what happens next. I know i have my opinion on who is in the hospital bed, but I really want to know for sure and know how the situation with emma get resolved.

Really beautiful story with a realistic touch,and i liked the tragic end,bravo

I loved this story. I do hope that you will finish chapter 4 soon. I just wish that you did not kill off Jackie or Jade in the crash. The story is a great love story of a TS and a straight male, who will become a TS as well and fall in love together. May we all find that special one to love in life.

Emma is just marking time till Nemisis strikes.

Much sweeter if she doesn't see it coming, until a voice out of the dark whispers "This is for Jackie and Jade, cunt."

Please keep them coming.

Evil Emma.........

Love the story so far. I know it’s years later but I have to give my opinion in case the author sees for later works it aspiring authors read it. The foreshadowing of death etc was like being hit repeatedly with a sledge hammer to the head. The accident and funeral scene would have been a lot more drama filled if I hadn’t been warned it was coming since way back in the first instalment. IMO it took away a lot of the emotional factor because I had been waiting for it to happen for many chapters and after what felt like the 20th “if only I had known” moment I was to the point of “just kill someone already”.