All Comments on 'One Week Ch. 06'
by Louise69
- 14 Comments
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoI think the previous comment is very harsh. I like that you've tried something different and applaud your work. Personally, I loved it and can't wait to see what happens next
Louise69almost 7 years agoAuthorJust wanted to say thank you for both your comments. I'm always interested in feedback, good or bad and hope that part 7 will be better if folks still want it. I was hoping to make something new and interesting but can see how it might not have been successful!
LinneaLundinalmost 7 years agoI for one, would very much appreciate more of this fantastic story. Please don't be deterred by those that can't enjoy a story that has been so generously laid before them. I love these characters and your style in bringing them to life. Please, more, more, more!
teddybearclubalmost 7 years agoLouise I can't enough. Thinking this would be the end. You left all an out. Our heroines have been through hell and now one lays bleeding to a certain death, the other cradling her sobbing. I just am unable to see you killing one and leaving the other in the world. Something very bad looms on the horizon.
Keep writing if not for yourself but for us fans also.
Love you,
TBC
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoI'm so emotionally invested in these characters I can hardly wait till Ep. 7!
Thank you for your hard work and thank Godess for your wonderfully wanton words!
Sincerely,
Rikki B
Anonymousabout 6 years agoThat cliff hanger at end has me full of salt but I absolutely adore your writing style! Keep up the stunning work ;P <3
Anonymousabout 5 years agoA total lack of clever or original material. Thoroughly unlikable characters doing and saying ridiculous things that were stupid even for fictional characters. Laughably bad.
1 star
Joann69almost 4 years agoCan't believe you killed her .
And I'm still waiting on the next 2 chapters.
Gingerfishabout 3 years agoI’ve only just found this series and absolutely loved it. Thank you @louise69, part 7 please!!!
Anonymousover 2 years agoMarco or Carlos? A little confusing! This is extremely long and tedious. I read the first edition and found perfectly enjoyable and believable. Killing off Louise made this into something akin to sensational lit. Ain't working!
