All Comments on 'Online Success Story'

Another great story.

I appreciate the details and the inner dialogue of the main character. It feels more than just a good fuck. Its not mecanical. It feels real and thats the beauty in a well written story.

As a woman, I also enjoy reading a story from a male character actually taking the time to savor the woman. I do love a good cock, but a story is much better when everyone envolved gets to climax and enjoy the other person.

Good work.

Looking forward to your next one.

Josie : )

This reminded me of the time my wife and I found a secluded spot in a state park on a warm spring day. After a picnic lunch, we got naked and she had me lie on my back on the blanket. She mounted my hard cock and rode me cowgirl, with her eyes closed and her huge tits bouncing. After her orgasm ended, she let me suck on her big, hard nipples until I shot my load into her hot pussy. Fun times! I miss her -- she died 5 years ago.

Another short masterpiece. Keep them coming! (Keep US cumming, too!) ;)

Although the sexual content in this story is strong and up to a point enjoyable to read, it comes across as a bit too sudden and impersonal to be fully appreciated. The characters hardly know one another, and to me it comes across as a 'mechanical' encounter! Best wishes,

Robertodavo Robert Davidson.