All Comments on 'Only a Dream'

Need more.

I loved the buildup of the story as an almost magical beginning. I liked it, now if only a few more pages grace the site.

RS

why did she have to sneak out and then back in the house?

@Anon I could have made that clearer, you're right. It's supposed to be a multifamily home. They have 2 or more separate entrances and the living areas aren't connected between them. They're pretty common around here :)

I was surprised to see the story so well recieved and I truly appreciate your comments and feedback!

Expect more from me in the coming weeks.

Much love.

Mmmm

I hop you write some more as good as this one

That was really good for a short! I could get into it because I could empathize with her; waking up from a vivid sex dream so damn real but you didnt get to finish, so you have to do something about it ;)