All Comments on 'Onsen Research Project'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Quick in the sack

Ah - So!

weftandwarpweftandwarpabout 7 years ago

This is lovely. Thank you.

DadDavisDadDavisabout 7 years ago
0Thers has gotta be . .

In my opinion there a few more chapters (maybe 12) to this story.

pantographpantographabout 7 years ago
My dream vacation

Fantastic story with great pacing and a fantasy locale. The characters are genuine and loving.

OvercriticalOvercriticalabout 7 years ago
FantasyLand

Nothing like a good fantasy to start the day. Everything works perfectly and they smoothly work their way to eternal bliss.

I must say that the author and I have very different ideas of middle age. Jennifer is described as a middle-aged Japanese woman, yet by the end of the story they're talking about having children together. In my world middle-aged people don't have children. Still a very nice story. 5*

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