All Comments on 'Onus 05'

love the story just read all 5 of it

You know I really like you haha meaning as writer. You always come back and you write most amazingly. You make the characters that should be not so likable, the best characters you've ever heard about. That's real talent :) and I like whole hurt comfort thing you have. This series is my favorite ones.

Pleasant writing, hope you have another JAG haha.

Cheers

I'm so glad you got on a JAG :) The next chapter so soon was great! I feel badly for Shiloh, given the confusion he'd feel. I can understand why he'd wonder what Sam's motive is. I want to know too. But, I don't think it is anything nefarious. I think he lost his family and wanted to help. I am curious why he has all those medical supplies. Is he hoping to rescue other Onus? I am so looking forward to them getting to know one another and unraveling some of the mystery behind Sam's injuries, life, reasons for doing what he did for Shiloh, etc. I want to see Shiloh feel safe, truly safe. I can't wait for more.

As I'm sure you intended, you have whet my appetite for more. With such a big house and all the medical supplies, I have an idea or two what Sam might have in mind. I look forward to more.

I really like this story, please keep writing!

Please write more. I'm dying to see Shiloh finish healing emotionally and to find out Sam's secrets.

I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm loving this story :)

I hope you update soon. This story is very captivating.

I'm waiting for the next chapter :3 I really enjoy your writing so I'm being as patient as possible but getting antsy for the next installment x3x

I have read every chapter of all your stories many many times.Stalking your page here I wish you would write more

thany you very much for your amazing writing

This is so sweet. And it's not done! If only literotica had some kind of subscription system so it'd email me when you posted something new...

This story was amazing and I want it to be continued!