All Comments on 'Onyx Silk: Pharaoh's Harem'

No excitement at seeing a new young girl's body. No teasing -- of her or him. No description of how her various body parts looked, felt, tasted. No trepidation on her part for having to lose her virginity. No excitement as touching, caressing, tasting began. Just fucking, Too bad.

This piece could stand to do with a bit of story, though I suppose since the author didn't set out to do that from the start, it does what it says on the can. Might be a more worthy piece with more characterisation and story, but for the moment it stays in the region of imagination candy. No more, no less.

This is so good!! I might have to smoke a cigarette after reading that!! Please update soon!!!

Welcome to Literotica! This is a terrific intro, sensuous and textured within a richly drawn, under-explored exotic setting for the harem fantasy. I look forward to more of your work.

Maybe you could please think about pairing a few black female teachers with a white male student?