All Comments on 'Oops!'

Very good read. Keep on writing.

,,,oh go on. You know the rest.

CFB, this is a well-written, well re-invention of the 'Traveling Salesman' genre.

Funny ending. Well written. Very explicit and erotic.

Great story, loved the spontaneity and the heat. Doesn't sound like there is a sequel planned, but I'd still love to read one...

i will say that was a very erotic story with a interesting ending. I hope u continue the story and maybe even have them bump back into each other again

Great story, but it is sixth street in Austin.

and it's appreciated!

It's" taut" that you wanted, by the way.

That was hot, with a crazy twist. I loved it!