All Comments on 'Oops!'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Please

Please keep this story line going!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Where is the rest of the story?

Great potential. Sure there are too many typing mistakes, but the only thing I really care about is the story and you left out the all out unbridled sex between these two.

Write the second chapter!

catamitecatamiteabout 6 years ago
Mmmm

I love it, please go on. Fabulous story line

MushyguyMushyguyabout 5 years ago
Too good - too short

Really well written, and the characters are fantastic. But I really wanted it to keep going.

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