All Comments on 'Oops!'

A very nicely done story, without the overdone brutality that is normal in these sorts of settings. Keep it up

It read like a romance novel. Very nice.

I want to be Tina/Elise.

Why so cruel? so unfeeling? It was a very cold and brutal story. No depth. It jumped from place to place too quickly and with no emotion: almost like a boring, fact-reading deposition. The murder was too harsh and spoiled the turn-on. There were no choices either. It is too bad, because I read other stories of yours and liked them. This one was a mistake, though.