All Comments on 'Oops! Ch. 02'

What a romp! Chapter 2 suggests you have more to add to this story so I hope you continue. I enjoyed 'Oops' a great deal and this chapter lived up to expectation as a sequel. You handled the characters and events with masterful ease, probably something to do with the relaxed, open-minded voice you maintain as a writer. I can really picture these events. Very readable indeed. WW

An excellent story but it would have been much more erotic if when you came to this new reunion, and saw a still single Carly with a little toddler would have coming up to you calling you "Uncle", as a result of Carly getting pregnant from that "Oops!" I am looking forward to the next chapter.

So you setting up partner swapping for sure but might as well just go for big orgy and get it over with

It sounds like Carly wants to have it again

What the fuck? " beat his wife and daughters for the slightest of infractions.". Don't use words readers have to google to find the meaning. I don't believe you're Australian, as no Aussie would say "parking lot" we'd say "car park". And we don't say "ass", we say "arse". Only Americans fuck donkeys. Google it.