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jenellesljenelleslover 9 years ago
Who's the Slave

The entire story was very nice. My only criticism is the ending of chapter 3 was rushed. It felt like it just fell off a cliff rather than a smooth landing. Having tried to write, I know that endings can be more difficult than beginnings.

I'm going to read more of your work. Thanks

Elmer100Elmer100about 7 years ago

I found this story very refreshing

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