by skj111
A big improvement would happen by removing the anal sex part as the vast majority of people never engage in it. Seem far too many authors don't find their stories complete without anal action begins to wreck good otherwise good stories, becomes a mystery.
More anal please, coming from a girl who knows plenty of people who do it and love it!
You are teasing us with the "Ch. 01"
I really do hope there is more coming soon!