by nell_fenwick
But what I don't understand are the negative comments that begin "another tale". Seems to me if those people don't appreciate the words of fantasy, the tale of fiction, they should not bother to read them.
So please don't let them discourage you.
every once and a while i wish someone would write this stuff
and not turn a successful into a stupid, cowardly slut and tell these bone head to go fuck themselves. and just give up. and let some bone head control their lives.
Good story and actually believable. I loved the various descriptions of you being forced to suck their dicks. My dick was hard the entire time reading it imagining you on your knees for me...LOL! I would have gripped your hair and pulled you to me as they did. I would have thrust slowly and deeply into your throat feeling the erotic contractions of your throat around my VERY stiff and oozing dick...YAHOO! I would have loved to hear your gagging as I pulled out and pushed your face down on my pole over and over...very slowly...to maximize the pleasure....WHEW!! **MALAPULGA@YAHOO.COM
re: 'another tale...who can only get laid this way'
The AUTHOR IS FEMALE, you illiterate shit. You don't like other people's hard work? Fuck off!
Perfect lead story for a final revenge story. Maybe Blake and Ethan might be tricked into a fun night of being assaulted by a gang of wild gay bikers then sold into gay slavery, while Kate picks up the reigns of the real estate company. Oh so many delightful twists this one could create.
Absolutely brilliant. One of the best in this site. Very sexy scenario, excellent characterization, and great writing.