All Comments on 'Open House: By Appointment Only'

by nell_fenwick

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Another tale of a non-man male

Who can only get laid this way

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
I LIKED IT

But what I don't understand are the negative comments that begin "another tale". Seems to me if those people don't appreciate the words of fantasy, the tale of fiction, they should not bother to read them.

So please don't let them discourage you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
tried of women being suckers and stupid

every once and a while i wish someone would write this stuff

and not turn a successful into a stupid, cowardly slut and tell these bone head to go fuck themselves. and just give up. and let some bone head control their lives.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
You paint an arousing picture

Good story and actually believable. I loved the various descriptions of you being forced to suck their dicks. My dick was hard the entire time reading it imagining you on your knees for me...LOL! I would have gripped your hair and pulled you to me as they did. I would have thrust slowly and deeply into your throat feeling the erotic contractions of your throat around my VERY stiff and oozing dick...YAHOO! I would have loved to hear your gagging as I pulled out and pushed your face down on my pole over and over...very slowly...to maximize the pleasure....WHEW!! **MALAPULGA@YAHOO.COM

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
re: 'another tale...'

re: 'another tale...who can only get laid this way'

The AUTHOR IS FEMALE, you illiterate shit. You don't like other people's hard work? Fuck off!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
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This is so unrealistic I can't even.

KramBKramBabout 10 years ago
Perfect lead for a revenge story

Perfect lead story for a final revenge story. Maybe Blake and Ethan might be tricked into a fun night of being assaulted by a gang of wild gay bikers then sold into gay slavery, while Kate picks up the reigns of the real estate company. Oh so many delightful twists this one could create.

LiviaDrusillaLiviaDrusillaabout 4 years ago

Absolutely brilliant. One of the best in this site. Very sexy scenario, excellent characterization, and great writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Poison his coffee

imadronG0imadronG07 months ago

you lost your way with this story . shame really

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