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Click here"I don't see Debbie around. Did she head out?" Tyrone said. Debbie was a brown haired college senior who had been temping in the same building as Steven's office. Steven had gotten to her and she was "his date" for the party.
"Nope, she is over by the table doing lines with lead from the movie. Steven told her to have a good time but that they would fuck before he took her home."
Tyrone took his wife by the arm and they went inside. The house was now something out of Boogie Nights. Every piece of furniture could be (and had been) fucked on, the art was all erotic, the lighting all dim, and the air smelled of sex. In the living room several personal portraits of Kimy hung on the walls. Each one showed Kimy naked in various positions of sex. She had painted them herself based on some photos Steven took. Like all her work, they were wonderfully done.
Tyrone nodded and led Monica out the door. Monica looked a bit surprised. "We are going home? This party is going to go till dawn, why the rush?"
Tyrone squeezed her hand. "I want to fuck my lovely wife and partner in making a very Open Minded Community. I want to fuck her in private, with no one watching, because I want her to know exactly how much I love her and how much I enjoy doing this with her."
Monica grinned and licked his ear. "Well, then, let's go."
Just outside the door Tyrone leaned in close to Monica and said "You know, this housing project is all filled up now. No more room for growth."
Monica nodded.
"Well, a friend of mine called the other day with an offer on a new real estate deal. Turns out he wants a partner to go in on buying a new high end apartment building."
Monica looked her husband in the eyes and said "Tell me more..."
THE END?
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoWith your own discord server, you will be only surrounded by your true fans who know how to appreicate your stories properly .
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoI read the first and second part quite a while back and decided to reread them today. The title's quite catchy - "Open Mind" lol - so I had no trouble finding these again! Man, I've gotta say, your stories give me the best orgasms. Please keep up with the updates!
Oh, also, I vaguely remember your other stories were about superheroes or something? To be honest, I think I like the Open Mind stories a lot better because I'm not really into superheroes.
Anonymousabout 6 years agoNot gonna lie these are fantastic. I wish there were two of you so there could be more stories faster. I guess if I would want anything it would be to push the corruption thing further, for instance perhaps they’re even more pure like a teacher, preacher or nun.
Anonymousabout 6 years agoHave you stopped posting your stories at The Erotic Mind-Control Story Archive?
Moosetalesabout 6 years agoAuthorFor the poster who mentioned the name change. Thank you for noting that, I missed it and that error is on me (got my stories mixed up when writing and switched out mind controlled Eastern Europeans). I'll fix that. Thanks!
Anonymousabout 6 years agoI often am like "These comments at the beginning are almost better than the stories themselves with the pure sass that always give a laugh" but then I read the stories and am like "Nah, the story's better"
Anonymousabout 6 years ago- Believe me. The kind of literature because this is LITERATURE in capitals -no kiding that you are writing is not usual. You follow a tradition of writers in which corruption, alcohol and drugs is the main issue. I love it. There is nothing more exciting than corrupt an innocent soul and bring it to the joy of wildside of life. There are very few great names of this writing style. I remember Masters as Downing Street, nwofns or The Sympathetic Devil. You are now for me one of the Masters!
Anonymousabout 6 years agoConsidering this was a 3 entry in the Open Mind series I thought it was a solid entry and could have perhaps been a bit longer spending a bit more time with the husband Steven as that was a more interesting premise than the Kim, Considering the stereotypes are on purpose and written that way I didn't find them offensive as it as part of the narrative, Only thing I found negative was Kim's accent which was bit grating. I think there is certainly scope for this series to continue
Moosetalesabout 6 years agoAuthorAllow me to thank everyone for being polite in their feedback, and actually giving me useful feedback. I completely get the whole "it's their right" argument. But I see this as a venue for people to give me feedback on making myself a better writer and how I could improve my stories or style. I do not see it as a place where people can be abusive and simply say "Fuck you asshole, you are a worthless fuckwad, racist and should be strung up!" (that was one I got on the original Open Mind story). If you don't like it, fine. If you have some feedback to convey about how you think it could be better fine also. If you simply want to call me names, what good does that do for anyone other than the jerk who gets to feel the big man because he told someone off (and usually does it as "anonymous")? I was seriously debating about finishing this one because when I said I got and still get tons of grief from this series I am not kidding. Well, its done, and that is that. If you liked it great, if not, okay and I hope you find something else that you like. If you want to tell me something, again all I ask is that you simply be polite about it.
