All Comments on 'Open Road Ch. 01'

I never rate or comment on first chapters, been bit too many times by never getting a second chapter, but this was really a nice start to what could be an awesome series... So keep writing!

Excellent.

I love it, pleeeeeeaaaaassssseeeee write more!

Good start!

Don't worry, there will be more chapters :).

Nice start...... whatever happens to the girls next? :)

Terrible story. Hey A.B., take it from one of your friends, that world you describe -- smoking cigars in parks, traveling aimlessly in a car taking temp jobs dealing cards --

is not worth a damn. Write about something that elevates people, brings them together in growth.

...and still no chapter two. Dopplergaydar, where are you? It was good to me.

Agree with the 6/29/16 comment: This story is a downer! Glad there's been no sequel.

So we never did find out what Abbie decided to do after all. But she would be crazy to throw away her future to travel with a group of people that have no stable job or place to live to be with a girl she only just met.

You can always come back.

Not worth the cyberspace this story takes up.