All Comments on 'Opening Up Jaime Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
mmmmmmmmmmmm......

wow! amazing work here. i just had to get my vibe and fuck myself while reading. godd this was a hot story. keep it up!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Encore

Please continue. This is definitely hot!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Keep it coming!

Quite enjoyable!

jakkjakkabout 19 years ago
hot

This story needs to go deeper no pun intended. It has the makings of a great love or at least lust story, please send the next parts soon this is a great read. "jakk"

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Keep it Cuuummmmming!

A great read can't wait for the next episode.

MffnQnMffnQnalmost 19 years ago
Wow...

Erotic and exciting... I'll be hanging around for the next chapter

don87654don87654over 18 years ago
Good, but could have been better

This gal definitely needs to have your baby. Ass hole fucking ain't gonna do it. I hope that your future chapters will lead to that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
keep the line going

Its developing and you're building..

David48David48over 18 years ago
To be sure

Sweet story. Sexy, Hot, and very loving. Can't beat it with a stick! Keep going please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Nice

I really enjoyed it, I will be waiting for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
awesome

maybe in the next a 3 or 4 some

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
go on...rite more chapters

rite more chapters..this one was hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Impressive

U are very talented. U need to write some more cause it's real good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Do your own thing

There's always some moron on this site who wants couples to keep going until they have a baby. Usually it's some nerd on Incest/Taboo. Let the author write his or her own story. I mean, what's your hang-up, anyway?

This has no plot to speak of. Just another stroke job.

Julie

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
i like a lot

love this story keep going i love the hot sex and the tender love blooming, your good at what you do, so keep getting my pussy wet with your stories. lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
WOW i loved it

omg i loved this. the perfect endin after however many chapters u do should be that they fall in love or sumthing but anyway i loved it plz write more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
HOTT!!

Get her pregnant and maybe fuck one of her virgin mates as well. Even make a habit of fucking both of them

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
More fuck details

This was hot and you should definitely continue!!

TrombonusTrombonusover 16 years ago
Great follow-up

Really enjoyed this second chapter. Hope to see more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
great

great more plz

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
loved it!

hopeing for more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
brilliant

i absoloutly loved this, you defintintly have to write more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Well done

I love it can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
next

please, please let there be more

chocolatesistachocolatesistaover 10 years ago
more please

i want them together

masterb4masterb4over 10 years ago
Please Please MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Very hot! Keep going!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
More More

More More

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

More please...love it

masterb4masterb4over 4 years ago
More More More

Keep it cumming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Yes MORE.

Enjoying how he is teaching her and how eager of a student she has become.

Anonymous
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