by GrumpyGamby
It is very well done and the emotions are real. The reader can understand and identify with the characters, especially the husband. Very good!
You have handled a very difficult subject beautifully, with sensitivity. I know I wouldn't even try to go where you have gone with this.
I don't think there is anything other than to say thank you.
bob
you have got me tied up into this story but i don't want this sadness. why does he have to have this illness? very strong and powerful. i will be checking back often.
this is so charged. you do a great job putting the reader right in the moment, feeling just what your characters are going through.
thank you looking forward to the next installment