All Comments on 'Opening Up: The First Night'

by LaDonnicciola

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Spell check

Check your spelling and grammar before posting. It's hard to get in the mood when trying to decipher a third grader's writing.

GRUMPY1962GRUMPY1962about 5 years ago
very good story

AT least this story the wife is a bit nicer to him. I understand acting the part when you are kinking but some courtesy is nice too.

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