All Comments on 'Optical Illusion'

Well written and very entertaining and very romantic. I hope you are both very happy.

Perhaps a bit exaggerated, but otherwise, an scenario which happens all too often. Sometimes, parents forget that the kids get to grow up and make their own choices.

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Really? Street names are capitalized. Always. And dresses sometimes have sequins, but I've yet to see one with sequence.

At that point I just gave up.

The story was well told and flowed well. As for the individual with the "Spelling Police", there was nothing that missed the editing process that took away from the story telling, or the ability to understand what the writer was portraying. The fact that you choose to shootdown others for things that you cant do yourself, and Hide in the shadows because you dont have the balls to say it without the cloak of invisibility that the anonymous comment allows you, tells me enough about you to just feel sorry for you. Grow up and get a life.

I have read and reread this story and always come away living it more. Thank you so much for writing it.

A rushed ending,,,think about it

And I know it's kind of chickenshit, but were it me, I would have told that asshole father-in-law that he'll see his grandkid about a half hour after hell freezes over. See how the bastard likes it when the shoe is on the other foot. Then again, I have been told that I am a vindictive SOB.

My headlights pierced through the night and rain when the sequence on her white gown reflected back the light towards me.

SHOULD BE:

My headlights pierced through the night and rain when the SEQUIN on her white gown reflected back the light towards me.

https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/sequin

dude, you are seriously in need of spellcheck for your stories.