All Comments on 'Oral Adoration'

by KayPS

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germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uabout 8 years ago

Can't say this writing style is a favorite of mine but I do appreciate this change of pace from most stories. KayPS, you threw me when in the midst of all this Adoration talk, you said your face must "stink" of your lover's pussy and then you call her a "filthy bitch." Go figure (?).

KayPS, thank you for taking time out to share your creativity in writing. All the best..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
DAMNN

THIS WAS SO GOOD 👏🏻

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Holy fuck

This was easily the hottest thing I've ever read. Afterwards I had to remind myself that I wasn't actually in it. And thank you for that wonderful orgasm ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Nearly Perfect

A little bit of editing would have made the story a bit easier to read through, but other than that, it was really enjoyable. I just wish it was slightly longer.

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