by gradprof
Best chapter yet. Wish you had him set the camera up to film the rest. Can't wait to read how you out do this one.
Anyone about to read this as the first chapter please go back to the first to really enjoy this one. you have to read the development of the caracters to really enjoy this.
"...a lust to which she would be forced to succumb." And succumb I did. So creative with your words and situations. I even learned a new term - quim! Thanks ever so much for writing these.
If I could vote more than five stars I would! That was too hot for words. You have outdone yourself with this story...Rick Y