by gradprof
Wow what can I say I loved the book and loved the storyline. At times it was a little far fetched but it was the ultimate mans fantasy. Thank you for the opportunity to read it I look forward to reading more in the future
not bad. not bad. i *flips hair* of course made it better. thanks for listening to me most of the time. but its sooo much fun to give you crap. kudos and all that jazz... rawr, etc, etc.
not bad. not bad. i *flips hair* of course made it better. thanks for listening to me most of the time. but its sooo much fun to give you crap. kudos and all that jazz... rawr, etc, etc.
Party was a nice touch. Love the way you wrapped the story up at the end.
Hope you next stories are a hot but with a completely different storyline.
You really have a way with words and had some great descriptions. I look forward to whatever you plan to write next.
I'm gonna miss this series, one of my all-time favorites. I looked forward to the new installments. Perhaps you could re-visit some of the characters in "spin-offs" or something, like give Taryn and Roxy another story. Either way, I look forward to whatever it is you've got coming.
series was great, indulging in all of the male fantasies, you even slipped in boots!
What can I say, I loved your decription of each conquest. Never have I heard a cunt be described and used in so many different ways. You have a gift of story telling. I could not wait to move onto the next chapter and then it was over. It left me hanging and wanting more.
Loved the ending and can only imagine where it goes from there.
JAR
Hey! In the middle there it got kinda formulaic but ended magnificently. Well done. A masterpiece.
Loved the end!!! Story-lines on here usually have a lame ending, either predictable or they backed themselves into a corner. I loved this one!!! Weird sex scenes at times, but really kinky!
Perhaps it was the reference in one of your chapters about Foucault's Discipline and Punish that got me going. I was totally floored by this amazing series! It's one sexual fantasy after another.
It seems odd to write this about someone who writes erotica, but you've got a lot more talent than some people out there who write normal books. That was a very, very well written story. While it was obviously fantasy, it was felt realistic....honestly, 10 out of 10. I look forward to reading whatever else you have.
One of the best written stories I have read. Can't wait for another series. Had to stay up later each day to finish the story. Thank you.
Early on I didn't think I'd make it through this series, but you hooked me with just a few hints of this being more then just a series of entertaining fantasy scenes. It was worth hanging in to the end - great finish! I guess I'm still a sucker for a romantic and happy ending!
Of course u should make this a second and third bookm this is worthy of a oscar keep it up
I need you to write a 2nd book to this just this chapter alone i got off 3 times...
One of the best series I've read, a pleasure to not have spelling and grammar distract from a wonderful story. Thank you.
The author has written a fascinating series of stories. The storytelling is a 5, the character development is excellent, descriptive language is highly erotic. Unfortunately, the negative/violent/insulting nature of the character interactions spoils the storytelling.
Too many violent/aggressive sex acts- not enough pleasure!
The author's talent is wasted because of the aggressive and violent dialogue and sex distracts from the basic story
I think the story has ended leve it to the imagination to end it for ourselves..