by Tashkent
almost perfect... verbal abuse for us sickos, please.
can't wait for the rest
The story is fine in describing the sexual mechanics, but I don't get a sense of who these characters are. What are their names? What motivates them? Why are they acting as they are?
I don't usually comment but I have to on this. This is the sexiest story i have read on this site. I am a woman and this is the first story that has all the elements to get me off. And I disagree, verbal abuse would ruin it. More please! I was sad to see you have no other stories.
as one who loves giving blow jobs, this story had me throbbing from the very beginning. i would have loved to have been the woman in this story. i loved it from beginning to end. thank you for sharing this!
Like another reader, I don't usually leave comments, in fact this is probably my first, but I felt compelled to leave a comment on this story. Wonderfully descriptive and intelligent, but seriously horny imagery, I came twice reading it myself and would like to say that by far it is the best story I have ever read. I can't wait to read more of your work, you have a gift.
Thank you!
This is literally the perfect story. I'm just so, so sad that there isn't more!!