All Comments on 'Orange County Cheer Squad Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Nice fantasy, but a pretty good way to die early.

Not just one slut but 15. STD russian roulette, with 5 cylinders loaded.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Good start...

But too short. Needs more background, and a longer encounter wouldn't be bad either. Still, a promising start as noted.

Oh, and ignore anonymous critics...all that means is they're too chcikenshit to put their names on it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
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would love to see where this goes next

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